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		<title>Weaponized Music</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2011 20:42:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[1. I have been listening to Fela Kuti. His pidgin, his music. What little I know about him, I read on Wikipedia&#8211;which is to say: I know very little about Fela Kuti. I know very little about Africa. Less about &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/12/23/weaponized-music/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=589&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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<p>1. I have been listening to Fela Kuti. His pidgin, his music. What little I know about him, I read on Wikipedia&#8211;which is to say: I know very little about Fela Kuti. I know very little about Africa. Less about Nigeria.</p>
<p>2. Photos and videos suggest that Fela did not care for pants&#8211;at the same time, he seemed to prefer pageantry. Fela was a rock star, <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i2T53mwah0M" target="_blank">a big voice and a bigger show</a>. If people gathered at his concerts for the show, why did they join his commune? When is music a weapon? In Fela&#8217;s Nigeria, I suspect that persona was the weapon. Fela, the show, was too much for his opponents.</p>
<p>3. When is music a weapon? 1990: The <a href="http://www.gwu.edu/~nsarchiv/nsa/DOCUMENT/950206.htm">U.S. military&#8217;s boom-box blockade</a> of the Vatican embassy in Noriega&#8217;s Panama. Did Van Halen see any profits?</p>
<p>4. Fela&#8217;s offense, to compare soldiers to zombies. Fela would not take orders:</p>
<blockquote><p>Zombie no go go, unless you tell am to go (Zombie)<br />
Zombie no go stop, unless you tell am to stop (Zombie)<br />
Zombie no go turn, unless you tell am to turn (Zombie)<br />
Zombie no go think, unless you tell am to think (Zombie)<br />
- <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBgewcFh-cg" target="_blank">Africa 70, Zombie (1977)</a></p></blockquote>
<p>5. In Babylon silence was a weapon, but the silence gave voice to the Psalm:</p>
<blockquote><p>O daughter of Babylon, who art to be destroyed; happy shall he be, that rewardeth thee as thou hast served us.<br />
Happy shall he be, that taketh and dasheth thy little ones against the stones. (<a href="http://bible.oremus.org/?ql=191657499" target="_blank">Psalm 137:8-9, KJV</a>)</p></blockquote>
<p>6. Fela was an excess. He would have been a terrible head of state; he was a better, self-proclaimed &#8220;Chief Priest&#8221;. He preached a corrective, an antidote, prophecy. He might tear down, but could he build?</p>
<p>7. Daniel Auber&#8217;s <em>La muette de Portici</em> (1828) stirred the political passions of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Belgian_Revolution" target="_blank">Belgium&#8217;s (French) revolution</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>Amour sacré de la patrie,<br />
Rends-nous l&#8217;audace et la fierté;<br />
A mon pays je dois la vie;<br />
Il me devra sa liberté.</p></blockquote>
<p>8. Fela imported Black Power from America. When black America was busy looking for its royal African heritage, Fela gathered a harem of queens and adopted the role. Bold, tough and brazen: what white culture feared. Music became a weapon because it was a boast. Fela taunted Nigeria&#8217;s guns; they torched his place and killed his mother. Dead mothers are a weapon too.</p>
<p>9. When Milosevic silenced the news, Belgrade&#8217;s radio stations played a loop of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fuck_tha_Police" target="_blank">N.W.A.’s “Fuck tha Police”</a> and Public Enemy&#8217;s &#8220;Fight the Power&#8221;.</p>
<p>10. Cult of (doubtfully benevolent) personality. Fela returns to America as a story. Cultured, tamed, marketed. Che Guevara on a t-shirt; Fela Kuti on the soundtrack. His sons have inherited the show. Femi and Seun preach a similar message, but the beatings Fela won seem less likely to be given to his sons. Much could change, but has Nigeria imported &#8220;culture&#8221; from America. People are a weapon, better keep them entertained.</p>
<p>11. Pidgin brokin perfect, Abi?</p>
<p>12. &#8220;Strange Fruit&#8221; fed the outrage, but &#8220;<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/We_Shall_Overcome" target="_blank">We Shall Overcome</a>&#8221; sustained the movement.</p>
<p>13. Music doesn&#8217;t kill people; people kill people.</p>
<p>14. I do not trust the song anymore than I trust the poem. Most times it would be better to tie a millstone to the tongue.</p>
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		<title>Animal Suicide Note</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 00:08:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeremiah</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why should the human animal be prone to suicide? The question itself reveals the kind of loneliness in which we find ourselves. We presume a unique otherness&#8211;cognitively engaged, self-aware, self-examined. By definition, it would seem, only the animal with a &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/11/29/animal-suicide-note/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=580&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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<p>Why should the human animal be prone to suicide? The question itself reveals the kind of loneliness in which we find ourselves. We presume a unique otherness&#8211;cognitively engaged, self-aware, self-examined. By definition, it would seem, only the animal with a &#8220;self&#8221; can kill itself. Animals can be pressed to a kind of system failure, in which certain stresses (captivity, for example) lead to death. I once tried to feed an abandoned duckling, a mallard; in futility, it leaped in its cardboard box until it died. It would be hard to imagine, however, that its intentions (or &#8220;instincts&#8221;) were anything other than to escape. Cut off from the consciousnesses of other species, we cannot know if or when the deer has the urge to dash in front of the semi, or when the rat, in despair, takes its poison with purpose. For the most part, non-human, animal models for suicidality, are just that &#8230; non-human models. It is for this reason that researchers like <a href="http://dx.doi.org/10.1027/0227-5910/a000077" target="_blank">Preti</a> and <a href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2788815/" target="_blank">Malkesman</a> look for the traits in animal behavior that are known to be associated with human suicide risks, including: anxiety, impulsivity, and helplessness. Apparently, one can pester a mouse until it mostly gives up on life. Some switch eventually flips and the poor beast simply submits to predation. But the helpless mouse is helpless, not zelfmoord.</p>
<p>On the other hand, we are animals and there is no reason to suppose that our own system failures differ from those of other species. It is the reflection, this face in the mirror, our human narcissism which pushes us to assume that our creaturely break downs are in fact some kind of rational deliberation about the value of another minute of life. In contrast, philosophical suicidality is silly. Thinking about the more troubling questions of existence, even when the answers are dire, ranks among the pleasures of life. Even so, Socrates serves (on one side of the coin) as a fine case study of the suicidality of self-examination. After all, to examine one&#8217;s life is, ultimately, to weigh whether or not it&#8217;s worth living. For most of us, I suspect that a competing animal urge toward self-preservation (completely outside of any rational machinations), protects us from philosophical foolishness. But for others, a completely different noise burns through the mind. The pain itself (even if we might know its source and, therefore, its limits) rages and smolders in the brain stem. In as much as it is “natural” to jump off of a hot stove, likewise, a human, an animal, in pain will seek ways to escape. But when we humans leap or pull the trigger, even then something in us, that blasted narrator, observes: you&#8217;re about to jump; you&#8217;re about to do yourself in. The chatter itself is tiresome.</p>
<p>Having written this, having reworked it, once again, through my mind, and obviously with some motivation, I suppose knowing is itself a bit of a buffer. We survive, but, like any animal, among the wounded.</p>
<p><strong>References:</strong></p>
<p>Malkesman O, Pine DS, Tragon T, Austin DR, Henter ID, Chen G, Manji HK. Animal models of suicide-trait-related behaviors. Trends Pharmacol Sci. 2009 Apr;30(4):165-73. <a href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2788815/" target="_blank">PubMed Central PMCID: PMC2788815</a>.</p>
<p>Preti A. Do animals commit suicide? Does it matter? Crisis. 2011 Jan 1;32(1):1-4. <a href="http://pubmed.gov/21371964" target="_blank">PubMed PMID: 21371964</a>.</p>
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		<title>Daffadillies: Lycidas</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[And Daffadillies fill their cups with tears, To strew the Laureat Herse where Lycid lies. - John Milton, &#8220;Lycidas&#8220;. 150-151. With the daffodil, one comes to the end of Milton&#8217;s catalog of flowers in Lycidas. The daffodil makes frequent appearances &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/10/31/daffadillies-lycidas/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=567&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="padding-left:30px;">And Daffadillies fill their cups with tears,<br />
To strew the Laureat Herse where Lycid lies.</p>
<p style="padding-left:30px;">- John Milton, &#8220;<a href="http://www.dartmouth.edu/~milton/reading_room/lycidas/" target="_blank">Lycidas</a>&#8220;. 150-151.</p>
<p>With the daffodil, one comes to the end of Milton&#8217;s catalog of flowers in Lycidas. The daffodil makes frequent appearances in poetry (Dickinson, Frost, Herrick, Jonson, Shakespeare, Spenser, Wordsworth). It nearly rivals the rose and often tumbles into cliched preciousness. Its abundance in verse will come as no surprise to gardeners&#8211;were I to start another spring bulb garden, I&#8217;d probably include the poet&#8217;s narcissus (<em>Narcissus poeticus</em>). Not for its name, but because it grows so well, multiplies easily, and blooms abundantly. (I also like the shape and color&#8211;green-throated, stout yellow tubes, rimmed with orange against a very white background.) However, if Milton had any narcissus at all in mind, it seems unlikely that he would have thought of the <em>N. poeticus</em>. If he did think of <em>N. poeticus</em>, he would not have known it as the &#8220;poet&#8217;s daffodil.&#8221;</p>
<div id="attachment_572" class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 260px"><a href="http://digitalgallery.nypl.org/nypldigital/id?1155205"><img class="size-full wp-image-572" title="Narcissus pseudonarcissus" src="http://commonlysomething.files.wordpress.com/2011/10/redoute-n-pseudo.jpg?w=500" alt="Narcissus pseudonarcissus"   /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Narcissus pseudo-narcissus, Redouté, Pierre Joseph, 1759-1840</p></div>
<p>In Milton&#8217;s century, botanists were frustrated with the common name “daffodil.” It seemed, to them, to be misplaced. Derivative of asphodel (&#8220;the affodil&#8221;), the name seemed a better fit for the genus Asphodelus. But common names are stubborn and Gerard uses &#8220;daffodil&#8221; throughout his descriptions of Narcissus. He also notes: &#8220;The yellow English Daffodil groweth almost everie where through England&#8221; (134). Thus, I would bet that Milton meant, if he meant any specific Narcissus, for readers to recall the common daffodil (<em>Narcissus pseudonarcissus</em>). These were the flowers, as common as they were, to which botanists hoped that English speakers would limit there use of &#8220;daffodil.”</p>
<p>All the same, both the <em>N. poeticus</em> and the <em>N. pseudonarcissus</em> are mismatched to Milton’s somewhat mixed metaphor (part eyeball, part cup) in these lines. Not unlike the Narcissus myth, Milton gives the flower some human properties, specifically the ability to express grief. In the Narcissus story the flower bends its head over a stream to gaze at its own beauty, but in Lycidas the daffodil begins to weep and fills its cup with tears. I have no problem with the weeping, as saccharine as it is, but I see no way to fill its cup with liquid. Bent over, the common yellow daffodil cannot fill its cup with anything. In fact, it is probably bent over in this way to prevent it from flooding with rain water. Tears would merely spill to the ground. Although less bent, N. poeticus with its very short flute would serve similarly as a poor cup for sorrows.</p>
<p>Although not expressing incredulity, Sims is also underwhelmed by Milton’s daffodils:</p>
<p style="padding-left:30px;">The daffadillies with their cups full of tears seem to be deliberately anti-climactic to prepare for the sudden recognition of the unreality of all these flowers and of the &#8220;frail thoughts&#8221; of the poet about them. (89)</p>
<p>I agree with the unreality of the image, but I am less willing to make excuses for Milton. In many respects the poet was writing a faux-pastoral poem and at other times a genuinely pastoral poem. In both cases the young talent was showing us what he could do within and around the genre. He took risks and excelled (a lengthy flower catalog), but sometimes hit a false note (a teary-eyed daffodil).</p>
<p><em><strong>References</strong></em><br />
Gerard, John, and Thomas Johnson. 1975.<em> The herbal: or, General history of plants</em>. New York: Dover Publications.<br />
Sims, James H. “Perdita’s ‘Flowers O’ Th’ Spring’ and ‘Vernal Flowers’ in Lycidas,” <em>Shakespeare Quarterly</em> 22, no. 1 (Winter 1971): 87-90.</p>
<p>[Note: This is the twelfth post in a series. See also: <a href="../2010/01/18/the-flowers-in-miltons-lycidas/">The Flowers in Milton's "Lycidas"</a>, <a href="../2010/01/25/primrose-lycidas/">Primrose: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/02/03/tufted-crow-toe-lycidas/">Tufted Crow-toe: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/02/25/pale-jasmine-lycidas/">Pale Jasmine: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/05/28/white-pink-lycidas/">White Pink: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/07/28/not-your-freaking-pansy-lycidas/">Not Your Freaking Pansy: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/09/17/the-glowing-violet-lycidas/">The Glowing Violet: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/10/20/musk-rose-lycidas/">Musk-rose: Lycidas</a>, <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2010/12/09/woodbine-lycidas/">Woodbine: Lycidas</a>, <a title="Cowslips: Lycidas" href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/01/22/cowslips-lycidas/">Cowslips: Lycidas</a> and <a title="Amaranthus: Lycidas" href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/05/20/amaranthus/">Amaranthus: Lycidas.</a>]</p>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Sep 2011 21:48:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Once, many years ago, on introducing myself to the Irish poet, John Montague, I mentioned that I was from Kentucky. Immediately, he asked for my favorite poems by Robert Penn Warren. I had to admit that I had not paid &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/09/30/nostalgia-now-and-then/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=563&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Once, many years ago, on introducing myself to the Irish poet, John Montague, I mentioned that I was from Kentucky. Immediately, he asked for my favorite poems by Robert Penn Warren. I had to admit that I had not paid much attention to Warren&#8217;s poetry. Montague was visibly dismayed. I had probably read a few Warren poems and I know that I had read <em>All the King&#8217;s Men</em>, but I was more fond of Kentucky prose (Wendell Berry and Guy Davenport) at the time.</p>
<p>I am trying to remember why I had passed over Warren so quickly. Perhaps it was the association with &#8220;New Criticism&#8221; (which was politically incorrect in my graduate school), but I also recall a frustration with both the subjects and the pace of Warren&#8217;s verse. For example, on re-reading a few of the anthologized poems today, I am struck by his penchant for hyphenated nouns and the use of the spondee. On this account, see a few samples from his Coleridgean poem &#8220;<a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=tBMN6gmiA6EC&amp;lpg=PA113&amp;pg=PA113#v=onepage&amp;q&amp;f=false" target="_blank">Gold Glade</a>&#8220;: wet-black, gorge-depth, leaf-lacing, leaf-fall, heart-hurt, grief-fall, Gold-massy, light-fall, gold-falling, tooth-stitch, gray-shagged. And these are merely the hyphenated words, add the spondees and one has a recipe for some slow chewing. But this is a recent revelation. I&#8217;m certain that I relied on my less self-conscious ear in the 90s. As for the subjects, I was (and perhaps I still am) afraid of the nostalgia of self-identifying Southerners. I could (or have been) one of these, a nostalgic &#8220;son of the South&#8221; &#8230; particularly when I tire of the well-intentioned contextual emptiness of the Midwest. (Southern nostalgia may be made from equal parts of molasses and rat poison.) To this day, I am wary of it.</p>
<p>On the other hand, I am reaching an age in which nostalgia fuels memory. Thus, I have been fascinated lately with Warren&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=tBMN6gmiA6EC&amp;lpg=PA339&amp;pg=PA339#v=onepage&amp;q&amp;f=false" target="_blank">American Portrait: Old Style</a>&#8221; from the volume <a href="http://www.worldcat.org/title/now-and-then-poems-1976-1978/oclc/249766142" target="_blank"><em>Now and then: poems 1976-1978</em></a>. This very nostalgic poem relies on Warren&#8217;s narrative skills. The poem keeps some of the internal rhyming, alliteration and spondees which sometimes clot his verse, but these are masked (a bit) by the story line. I think of Coleridge, again (in so far as it recalls childhood as a privileged place for the imagination), but Warren&#8217;s Coleridgean bent is tempered by the focus on the relationship between the poet and his childhood friend. The ageing ex-pitcher and bird dog trainer, tends to humanize Warren in a way that his own thoughts (out of context) do not. While the poetry strives for a false immortality, the body does not. K, as he is named in the poem, ages Warren by giving us a reference point that is a bit more approachable and less authorial. And so, when the poet lies down in the ditch he once played in as a child, and watches the sky pass over, it&#8217;s easier to join him; it&#8217;s easier to love this life and this world that we share.</p>
<p><em>The Collected Poems of Robert Penn Warren</em> stretches to an overwhelming 830 pages. I think I will begin, instead, with <em>Now and then</em>.</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2011 15:05:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[We moved this summer, a few miles north to an older house with a larger yard. The work of transporting six people and all their junk to a new location has been, not surprisingly, disruptive. My bicycle commute has tripled &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/transitional/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=558&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We moved this summer, a few miles north to an older house with a larger yard. The work of transporting six people and all their junk to a new location has been, not surprisingly, disruptive. My bicycle commute has tripled (happily for the miles spent in the wind, less so for the lost writing time). Grocery shopping seems, for the moment, more complicated. Everyone&#8217;s routine has shifted&#8211;showers, laundry, homework locations and personal turf. And, we moved right smack in the middle of the growing season. Thus, I &#8220;waited&#8221; until this week to plant our fall garden. Lettuces, radishes, spinach and greens are all sweeter in the cool months. So, after a blistering hot summer, I&#8217;m hoping for a sunny, but mild fall with a late frost. Given that a large ash tree shades most of the garden, we&#8217;ll probably need more than 45 days to have a full harvest. The ash tree will make gardening a challenge next year. I may have to grow sun hungry plants in containers or find a spot in a local community garden. On the other hand, I&#8217;ve discovered that shade extends the life of some garden plants. The basil, for example, which I moved in pots to our new location, is sweeter and greener than in past years. Without full exposure to the sun, it has not gone to seed &#8230; and so, we have spring-flavored basil in late August.</p>
<p>I have been reading Wallace Stevens&#8217; &#8220;Sunday Morning&#8221; one stanza at a time before falling asleep. At this age, I am neither challenged nor amused by it. I read the second book of the Ursula K. Le Guin&#8217;s Earthsea series, <em>The Tombs of Atuan</em>, in half as much time. In my life, both worlds, Earthsea and the land of quiet Sunday mornings with coffee and elaborate rugs, seem equally distant. I may be due for another reading of <em>Don Quixote</em> soon, or maybe, after the frost, more Coleridge.</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jul 2011 14:56:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Valerie Sayer&#8217;s Brain Fever is a very Catholic book in that it&#8217;s not quite Catholic enough for a Protestant reader to make ready religious sense of it. The characters, especially the leading man, Tim Rooney, an anti-hero, are constantly repositioning &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/07/28/a-protestant-reading-of-valerie-sayers-brain-fever/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=552&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Valerie Sayer&#8217;s <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Brain-Fever-Valerie-Sayers/dp/0385473664/" target="_blank">Brain Fever</a></em> is a very Catholic book in that it&#8217;s not quite Catholic enough for a Protestant reader to make ready religious sense of it. The characters, especially the leading man, Tim Rooney, an anti-hero, are constantly repositioning themselves relative to their waxing or waning Catholicity. Even so, no one really makes a &#8220;Here I stand&#8221; commitment for or against the Church. The characters are Catholic because their faith is an inheritance more so than an allegiance. They know it like the decor of their childhood homes, a decor they would gladly change but for the fear of insulting their mothers.</p>
<p>The plot of <em>Brain Fever</em> is simple enough. A literate, middle-aged Southerner slides into mania, leaves his fiancé and heads to the city of New York where he spends his time revisiting the places he frequented during his youth as a graduate student. Meanwhile the people that care about him move in and out of his territory, trying to find him, trying to help him, trying to make sense of his insanity and, ultimately, racing to save him from his own demise.</p>
<p>While pathetic, Tim Rooney is less than likeable. On the other hand, the cast of subordinate characters who try to help him are very likeable. As the book draws to a close, the reader will find that one worries more about the impact of Tim&#8217;s behavior on others than about the risks that Tim himself faces. Thus, Sayers has made of Mr. Rooney a very effective anti-hero. Comparatively, we know very little about the supporting characters, but what we know about the life and mind of the anti-hero makes us empathize with his friends. As a group, one might think of these folks as the Catholic communion&#8211;the lay people (a South Carolinian diaspora, in this case) who, wittingly or not, do their best to minister to the whole body of Christ, a body which includes the nearly toxic Tim Rooney.</p>
<p>The religiously illiterate Catholic community, therefore, is the hero of the book. Why do these characters love Tim? I&#8217;m not persuaded that any of them really know&#8211;and some of them wish that they didn&#8217;t. Were they to start thinking about it, Protestant style, it would drive them to some kind of Kierkegaardian madness at best and at worst they would succumb to the solipsism of the individual, the feverish idolatry of the self. In short, when you&#8217;re losing your mind it would be wise to have some habitual Catholics in your life.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Memory might be cultivated with care or it might be left to wither or spread as the seasons and circumstances permit. Most tend to it with some of the former and much of the latter. Perhaps I should not be &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/06/25/chicory/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=546&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Cichorium_intybus_cikoria.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-548" style="border-color:black;border-style:solid;border-width:1px;margin:5px;" title="chicory" src="http://commonlysomething.files.wordpress.com/2011/06/chicory.jpg?w=500" alt=""   /></a>Memory might be cultivated with care or it might be left to wither or spread as the seasons and circumstances permit. Most tend to it with some of the former and much of the latter. Perhaps I should not be surprised by the recent force of those weedy incidents from the first decade or so of my life. Many are of no real consequence, but seem to have a lasting force&#8211;a fig tree behind a garage in Arkansas, the odor of boxwood at Keeneland, asparagus in the fence rows in Versailles, and chicory in the front pasture of the family farm.</p>
<p>Rooted in my memory, the ephemeral morning blue of the chicory marks a season in which the lettuce beds have also gone to seed. The baby blue with hints of powder and lace open above improbable soil and jangly stems. Until noon they bloom a cool fog in the worst places&#8211;exit ramps, new construction, vacant lots. And now, though they flower thirty Junes on in the margins of my urban life, I can turn in the pasture of my childhood and feel the grade of the field, see the locust trees on the ridge, and wince at the mound of dirt where my father buried our favorite mare.</p>
<p>I must remember not to let summer pass without chicory or I would live as a stranger in exile from myself.</p>
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		<title>Amaranthus: Lycidas</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[And every flower that sad embroidery wears: Bid Amaranthus all his beauty shed. &#8211; John Milton, &#8220;Lycidas&#8220;. 148-149. The amarant provides a good study of the-roster-or-the-chicken-or-the-egg problem in language. What came first? The myth, the metaphor, or the word? I &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/05/20/amaranthus/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=532&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="padding-left:30px;">And every flower that sad embroidery wears:<br />
Bid Amaranthus all his beauty shed.</p>
<p style="padding-left:60px;">&#8211; John Milton, &#8220;<a href="http://www.dartmouth.edu/~milton/reading_room/lycidas/">Lycidas</a>&#8220;. 148-149.</p>
<div id="attachment_542" class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 210px"><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Illustration_Amaranthus_retroflexus0.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-542 " title="Amaranthus retroflexus" src="http://commonlysomething.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/amaranthus_retroflexus200px.jpg?w=500" alt=""   /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Otto Wilhelm Thomé Flora von Deutschland, Österreich und der Schweiz 1885, Gera, Germany</p></div>
<p>The amarant provides a good study of the-roster-or-the-chicken-or-the-egg problem in language. What came first? The myth, the metaphor, or the word? I speculate that the word, amarant, did not come first, but perhaps it came second. With its roots in Greek, the word means not-fading, incorruptible, or (as is said of many plants with long-lasting floral displays) &#8220;everlasting.&#8221; The modern, widely distributed genus, <em>Amaranthus</em>, is indeed an &#8220;everlasting&#8221; flower&#8211;although not truly &#8220;incorruptible,&#8221; it is also a vegetable and a pseudograin, but these facts are less to the point.</p>
<p>Amarant appears in two very old, very well-known texts. First, in Aesop&#8217;s fables (<a href="http://etext.virginia.edu/etcbin/toccer-new2?id=AesFabl.sgm&amp;images=images/modeng&amp;data=/texts/english/modeng/parsed&amp;tag=public&amp;part=311&amp;division=div1" target="_blank">The rose and the amaranth</a>, 6 BC) and later in the New Testament&#8211;although, as a word and not as a plant (<a href="http://bible.oremus.org/?ql=172858128" target="_blank">1 Peter 5:4</a>, about 100 AD, give or take a few decades). In both cases, the word refers to an everlasting, floral display of beauty. In Aesop, it possesses a persona and so begins its journey as myth; in the New Testament it serves metaphorically, but waits for Clement of Alexandria and others (like Milton) to plant it firmly in soil of Christian symbol and allegory. Having encountered its literary type long before finding the plant in a garden (if ever), many editors and annotators assume that the plant was first imagined and later given as a name to the genus. While it is true that Aesop precedes all Linnaean names for plants, I found no evidence to disprove that Aesop may have known an actual plant (possibly an amarant) which he contrasted favorably with the fading rose. After all, no one suggests that Aesop did not mean the rose of genus <em>Rosa</em>&#8211;i.e., no one would propose that Aesop meant an imaginary plant for great beauty that he just happened to name &#8220;rose.&#8221; Why should we not assume that Aesop had an amarant somewhere in gardens of his daily life? It is for this reason that I would guess that somewhere, many, many years before Aesop, people saw a plant, realized that its flowers were long-lasting, and named it &#8220;amarant.&#8221; Thus, the metaphor would have been first (this plant is like something that never fades), and the word second (let&#8217;s call it &#8220;amarant&#8221;) and the myth third (so, there&#8217;s this plant which is named &#8220;amarant,&#8221; and long, long ago in fable-land the amarant said to the rose &#8230;).</p>
<p>Milton muddles the matter with an inventive conceit in his great poem:</p>
<p style="padding-left:30px;">                                                                          [L]owly reverent<br />
Towards either Throne they bow, and to the ground<br />
With solemn adoration down they cast<br />
Thir Crowns inwove with Amarant and Gold,<br />
Immortal Amarant, a Flour which once<br />
In Paradise, fast by the Tree of Life<br />
Began to bloom, but soon for mans offence<br />
To Heav&#8217;n remov&#8217;d where first it grew, there grows,<br />
And flours aloft shading the Fount of Life,<br />
And where the river of Bliss through midst of Heavn<br />
Rowls o&#8217;re Elisian Flours her Amber stream;<br />
With these that never fade the Spirits elect<br />
Bind thir resplendent locks inwreath&#8217;d with beams. &#8211;<a href="http://www.dartmouth.edu/~milton/reading_room/pl/book_3/index.shtml" target="_blank">Paradise Lost, III:349-61</a>.</p>
<p>Russell M. Hillier makes a good case for the influence of Clement of Alexandria&#8217;s <em>Paedogogus</em> on this passage of Milton&#8217;s most famous poem. Milton places the plant (as does 1 Peter) in heaven; it adorns the crowns of the angels&#8211;but he also tells us why the flower is found in heaven and (presumably) not on earth. As it is &#8220;incorruptible,&#8221; it was transplanted from garden of Eden after the fall of Adam and Eve. In other words, after the fall, the earth was no place for a flower of everlasting beauty. Perhaps Milton knew an <em>Amaranthus</em> plant by a different name, but he does seem to assume that it was first a myth. Were Milton to find the plant in our gardens and whole-food stores, he would assure us that is was wrongly named.</p>
<p>In &#8220;Lycidas,&#8221; Milton uses the amarant with even less clarity. He calls for the everlasting flower to shed its beauty upon the hearse of his deceased friend, Edward King. Did Milton mean that the flowers would be everlastingly beautiful on the casket, even though departed from the plant? Did Milton intend that the amarant should humble itself at such an event of grief and loss &#8230; in other words, foreshadowing the conceit in <em>Paradise Lost</em>&#8211;a world without Edward King is no place for an incorruptible beauty? Of the two, the first seems more likely to me. Perhaps Milton hoped to send King to his imagined grave with the ornaments he might use to attire his heavenly crown or perhaps he meant to confirm the deceased&#8217;s salvation while also making a gesture toward the young man&#8217;s &#8220;immortality&#8221; in verse.</p>
<p>Whatever the case, I find the amaranth to be an ugly plant&#8211;especially the ornamental Love-lies-bleeding. On the plate, however, it is very interesting. The seeds are earthy and sweet, while the greens have just a bit of peppery bite. Last summer a local co-op farm grew a small crop, I hope they expect a larger harvest this year. In all its ugliness, the genus <em>Amaranthus</em> (even spiny pigweed) should out last Milton&#8211;a world without Milton would be a dire place; a world without an <em>Amaranthus</em> would be a dead place.</p>
<p><em><strong>Reference</strong></em><br />
Hillier, Russell M. 2007. “To Say it with Flowers: Milton’s ‘Immortal Amarant’ Reconsidered (Paradise Lost, III.349–61).” Notes and Queries 54 (4) (December 1): 404 -408.</p>
<p>[Note: This is the eleventh post in a series. See also: <a href="../2010/01/18/the-flowers-in-miltons-lycidas/">The Flowers in Milton's "Lycidas"</a>, <a href="../2010/01/25/primrose-lycidas/">Primrose: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/02/03/tufted-crow-toe-lycidas/">Tufted Crow-toe: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/02/25/pale-jasmine-lycidas/">Pale Jasmine: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/05/28/white-pink-lycidas/">White Pink: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/07/28/not-your-freaking-pansy-lycidas/">Not Your Freaking Pansy: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/09/17/the-glowing-violet-lycidas/">The Glowing Violet: Lycidas</a>, <a href="../2010/10/20/musk-rose-lycidas/">Musk-rose: Lycidas</a>, <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2010/12/09/woodbine-lycidas/">Woodbine: Lycidas</a> and <a title="Cowslips: Lycidas" href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/01/22/cowslips-lycidas/">Cowslips: Lycidas</a>.]</p>
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		<title>Micah Ling&#8217;s Sweetgrass in 200 Words</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Having raced through Micah Ling’s Sweetgrass (Sunnyoutside, 2010) twice, I’m perplexed. Not by the material, which is sweet and, as is grass, light and easy, but by genre and intentions. While the short book expresses an honest affection for her &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/04/18/micah-lings-sweetgrass-in-200-words/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=525&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.worldcat.org/title/sweetgrass/oclc/698623308"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-526" style="border:1px solid black;margin:5px;" title="Sweetgrass" src="http://commonlysomething.files.wordpress.com/2011/04/sweetgrass.jpg?w=500" alt="Sweetgrass"   /></a>Having raced through Micah Ling’s <em>Sweetgrass</em> (Sunnyoutside, 2010) twice, I’m perplexed. Not by the material, which is sweet and, as is grass, light and easy, but by genre and intentions. While the short book expresses an honest affection for her Western encounters, and while a few pages demonstrate creative verve&#8211;the poem beginning “Listen: this is a stick up” is the best stand-alone lyric&#8211;on the whole, these untitled bits produce an unstructured essay. As it turns out, <a href="http://www.sweetgrassranch.com/" target="_blank">Sweetgrass</a> is a dude ranch in Montana, so one might even wonder if the book belongs to the what-I-did-on-my-summer-vacation genre. The voice of the book is that of a tourist, not of one who shares a deep knowledge of her subject, nor of one who has any real or lasting allegiances to the place. As readers we are pulled into a kind of voyeurism—uncomfortably, we watch someone we do not know have a really good time in Montana. Ling and her hosts seem like truly nice people, but what’s missing from the book is the work. Not the romanticized work of the cattle ranch, but the work of hosting its gawking visitors. Being under the gaze itself must be a chore.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[On mulling over Elizabeth Bishop&#8217;s &#8220;The Fish,&#8221; something smells wrong. I have been slowly turning the poem about in my mind trying to identify the off note. Sometimes I think I have found the source of the stench, but then &#8230; <a href="http://commonlysomething.wordpress.com/2011/03/25/bishop%e2%80%99s-fishy-poem/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a><img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=commonlysomething.wordpress.com&amp;blog=11232253&amp;post=517&amp;subd=commonlysomething&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dagon"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-520" style="border:1px solid black;margin:5px;" title="Dagon" src="http://commonlysomething.files.wordpress.com/2011/03/dagon.jpg?w=300&#038;h=287" alt="" width="300" height="287" /></a>On mulling over Elizabeth Bishop&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/virtualit/poetry/fish_elements.html" target="_blank">The Fish</a>,&#8221; something smells wrong. I have been slowly turning the poem about in my mind trying to identify the off note. Sometimes I think I have found the source of the stench, but then it slips away. Nonetheless, there&#8217;s something wrong with this classic, much read and taught, poem.</p>
<p>As a way to spend one&#8217;s days, I prefer fishing to most all other activities&#8211;perhaps, truth be told, even to reading and writing poetry. One might think, therefore, that I would have a greater than usual appreciation for Bishop&#8217;s fish story. I think, however, that it is this very first-hand appreciation of angling that makes me suspicious of Bishop&#8217;s poem.</p>
<p>My first inclination was to object that Elizabeth Bishop knew nothing of fish&#8211;that she, herself, did not go fishing often. About this, I was probably wrong. She spent much time in Nova Scotia and in Key West&#8211;and even mentions her fishing trips in a letter or two. Having discovered Bishop&#8217;s, at least, passing familiarity with fishing, I next objected that the fish of the poem was not a fish that poet saw with her own eyes. It never swam in the water, never took bait, never broke a line. Ronald E. McFarland,  excerpted at the beginning of the page at <a href="http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/a_f/bishop/fish.htm" target="_blank">UIC&#8217;s Modern American Poetry Site</a>, believes that such an objection may be easily dispatched. He refers, as all do, to her days lived near the water&#8217;s edge and even goes on to speculate about type of fish that Bishop might have meant for the poem&#8211;he puts his money, without much real evidence, on the grouper.</p>
<p>As it turns out, Bishop herself, in her letters, provides conflicting information about the fish. First, in an epistle to (the superior poet) Marianne Moore, Bishop writes nothing of a grouper and instead identifies the parrot fish, so named for its loud colors and hook-beaked mouth:</p>
<p style="padding-left:30px;">The other day I caught a parrot fish, almost by accident. They are ravishing fish – all iridescent, with a silver edge to each scale, and a real bill-like mouth just like turquoise; the eye is very big and wild, and the eyeball is turquoise too – they are very humorous-looking fish. A man on the dock immediately scraped off three scales, then threw him back; he was sure it wouldn’t hurt him. I’m enclosing one [scale], if I can find it. (<a href="http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/a_f/bishop/letters.htm" target="_blank">January 14, 1939</a>)</p>
<p>Later, in a letter to (the far, far superior poet) Robert Lowell, Bishop sends a post-card of the &#8220;Jew-fish&#8221; (a Goliath Grouper) to the poet, saying: &#8220;Dear Cal: These are the &#8220;Fish&#8221;&#8230;. (<a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=bS-3Amuska8C&amp;lpg=PP1&amp;pg=PA71#v=onepage&amp;q&amp;f=false" target="_blank">December 21, 1948</a>)</p>
<p>Setting aside the confusion that Bishop&#8217;s two letters fosters, I still insist that the fish is not the fish that Bishop caught &#8230; if she caught a fish. Rather, what we find in the poem is a caricature of a fish. It is as if the poet could not or would not take the factual fish as her model and so chose a fanciful one instead. What we have here (to cut too close to the poem&#8217;s allegorical bone) is a not the oversimplified rendering of God on the ceiling of the Sistine Chapel, but rather the cartoonish parodies of Michelangelo’s image that have become the common stock of our cultural short-hand. Although the tone of the entire poem, which differs in such a great degree from the more honest note to Marianne Moore, seems ill-fit and improbable for the average fishing trip, it is the final images of the creature which I find the most unlikely and most objectionable. I have caught many, many fish, but only one with a lure in its mouth and a few with bait in their guts. Fish dislodge these irritants, or they rust away (one would think the salt water would make very quick work of the lines in this fish&#8217;s mouth)&#8211;on any account, most fish do not feed until they are free of the foreign object. To be very plain about it, a fish with a hook in its mouth is a fish that will not bite and will not be caught&#8211;a fish with four lines and leaders of rainbow hue hanging out of its mouth might be found at a puppet show, but not at the side of the boat. Bishop did not catch this fish.</p>
<p>Very well, one might reply. Bishop caught a fish, released it, imagined quite another fish and wrote a poem about the latter. What&#8217;s the big deal? I agree, in that there&#8217;s nothing dishonest about placing an imaginary fish in a poem, but I object to letting one&#8217;s readers assume a narrative veracity that does not exist. If the fish is imagined, so is the poet&#8211;her feelings, her brief epiphany and her fishy little moral lesson at the end, all are mere fantasy.</p>
<p>This dishonesty on Bishop&#8217;s part allows her readers to cede to her a voice of moral authority that she does not have. See, for example, Thierry Ramais&#8217;s thoughts at the bottom of this page on UIC&#8217;s Modern American Poetry Site:</p>
<p style="padding-left:30px;">The poem obviously celebrates a moment in person’s life when his/her humanness goes as far as to recognize the humanity of nature itself, to consider nature not as “object” but as equally “subject”. (On &#8220;The Fish&#8221;: <a href="http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/a_f/bishop/fish.htm" target="_blank">http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/a_f/bishop/fish.htm</a>)</p>
<p>The irony of this statement is lost on its author&#8211;as, perhaps, Bishop was oblivious to her own dishonesty. Nature has no &#8220;humanity&#8221; and when it does, it is smaller for it. (On the other hand &#8220;humanity&#8221; has much &#8220;nature&#8221;&#8211;clearly, humans are but one of nature&#8217;s many features.) Ramais and Bishop have empathies for creatures and for natures which do not exist and, as such, they do not respect the nature that does exist. The poet may make herself and a few of her readers feel better about their place in this world, but she has done so with forgery. I would much rather have the smell of fish on my hands.</p>
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